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This week for writing I was learning how to structure my piece of writing. It's about why Mr Wolf is guilty or not guilty of first degree murder I enjoyed writing this because it was easy.
what I found challenging to finish it on time.
I strongly believe Mr Wolf is guilty of first degree murder
because he killed Grandma and Red. I will tell you my four reasons
why he is guilty. Firstly he broke into grandma's house. He jumped through the window and chased her around.
Once he caught her he locked grandma up in the cupboard against her will because he was saving her for dinner.
Thirdly he impersonated grandma by dressing up in her clothes and pretended to be her. He was waiting for Red in Grandma's bed, when Red arrived he ate her.
Once he ate Red
Mr Wolf was still hungry. He then went to the cupboard, grabbed Grandma and ate her too.
This is why Mr Wolf is guilty of murder in the first degree. Do you agreed with me now
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