In Writing we have been learning to paragraph. I had to stick to one topic, and my first sentence is my topic sentence. I have added 2-3 supporting details my last sentence is a concluding sentence.
Eve Thomas is a NZ swimmer. She is 20 years old. She was born on the February 9th in SOUTHEND. She was raised in Australia. Her family lives in BRISBANE. The reason I chose her is because I like swimming and because she is 9 years older than me. Her mother Sarah Hardcastle represented Great Britain in swimming at the Olympic Games in 1984 and 1996, winning a silver medal in the 400m freestyle and a bronze in the 800m freestyle in 1984. Her father Lee Thomas played rugby for Swansea Rund by Football Club in Wales., 10 July 2012.
I also enjoyed learning about her mother and father and that they have all won medals.
I found
Kia ora Sam,
ReplyDeleteI learnt lots from reading your blog post. thank you for sharing this information. Do you know of any other athletes whose parents won medals as well?
from Mrs Torrie