Hanging out with my uncle

In Writing, we are learning to describe.
here is my story

 Hanging out with my Uncle I was super excited! waiting and waiting to go for ages.today was the day our would dreams come true.we waited in line almost there. Finally we're at Rainbow's End.my favourite ride today was between the Gold Rush or the VR. the goldrush was dark and out of nowhere we could hear elves giggling and laughing.they were mining for gold.there was a wizard on my left with gold coins and a dragon on my right.I freaked out as I saw a bright light subli I was screaming as I plunged down a steep slope. it made me spew. VR stands for Virtual Reality.when I put on the VR goggles it was black! then randomly a red circle came on, then an orange one, then a green one.suddenly I was transported and to the Arctic.I saw seal leap out of the water. a sign of a yeti came out of nowhere.he was walking around something that looked like a globe,it was an igloo.I saw a danger sign and then I got scared.the yeti went into the igloo got a Cannon and fired snowballs at me.out of nowhere penguin started shooting at me too. i-med managed to shoot the penguins.it was one of my favourite days ever.